I like this drawing. I think it definitely show movement. I like the jaggedness. It's vivid and jarring.
This is my second attempt
My original drawing had good lines but there was not much movement. This drawing definitely has definition. You can clearly see the lines moving, bending and folding into itself. It is a much stronger image.
This is my second attempt
You followed the project specifications using several different thicknesses in your lines and you went in many directions. I agree, this is a strong image.
ReplyDeleteWell done.